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Real name: Emma
Member Since: 05/01/2005
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The Shadow by Orion star star star star half star [Reviews - 2]
retired featured story This is a one shot original work, it just came into my head... It's about someone on the run, it's a bit dark, with a twist at the end... Worth reading!

Rated: S
Categories: Short Stories
Characters: None
Genres: Mystery/suspense
Warnings: Abuse

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 687 - Hits: 684
Complete?: Yes - Published: 10/03/2005 - Last Updated: 10/07/2005
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Reviewer: Fyrth Signed star star star star
Date: 10/08/2005 Title: Chapter 1: The Shadow

The brevity of this passage works in its favor; a lot of description, lot of vivid verbs all create a very moving piece. nicely done.

Author's Response: Thanks, I was worried it was a bit too short! Am very happy to hear you liked it :)