Very moving. It made me cry. Really.
Author's Response: I should be sorry it made you cry and I am in a way, but it also lets me know I managed to impart what I needed to when I wrote it. Thank you so very much.
When i read this poem, it reminded me of how much i love my brothers and sisters, and parents. I wouldbe destroyed if i lost one. I have five elder siblings, and a younger brother, they are my world. May god help you get over your loss, may he provide joy and happiness to fill the place of sorrow in your heart. I do not know if your brother is the one lost, or if it's you, but may you both be found.
God help us all,
J.S.
Author's Response: We lost my brother. That sounds so inadequate, but 'tis only the facts. I sat down and wrote this after the funeral and it helped settle my loss in my mind. Heart still hurts, but mind is clearer. Thank you so much for your kind words.
I enjoy ur way of writing. Im sorry for your loss, I wish I could help mend the pain.
Author's Response: I wrote this when I returned home from his funeral. I had some things to work through and it helped.
Wow, you really describe the loss of a loved one. Really, really good.
Author's Response: Thank you.