Well done. It reminds me of the great-grandmother's death in "Dandilion Wine", and brings back memories of a friend's child's peaceful death from a brain tumor.
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked this, especially because it brought back those particular memories. I was unfamiliar with "Dandilion Wine", but went to look it up as soon as you mentioned it. It seems like a book I would enjoy too. Thank you.