Reviews For The Dutiful Wife
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Reviewer: aerynfire Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2005 12:30 pm Title: Chapter Five

Wonderful chapter! *claps* But darn, now I want more! The tension is killing me...and I really can't stand Sera. One little thing, this chapter is labeled in the list as Prologue and not Chapter Five...you may want to fix that. :D I eagerly await the next installment. ~Aeryn

Reviewer: Orion Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 05:35 pm Title: Chapter Four

I'll second that, I'm following this story, and it keeps getting better with every chapter, I really feel like I know Natrie. Keep writing, please!

Reviewer: spikedust Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 09:01 pm Title: Chapter Four

another great chapter, wendynat!

Reviewer: Orion Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 03:57 pm Title: Prologue

Hi! I'm absolutely loving this, it all seems so real, I feel like I'm acutally there; it's strange! PLease update soon. It's excellent!

Reviewer: spikedust Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2005 01:57 pm Title: Chapter Two

this looks to be an exceptional story, wendynat. the tone of the story matches perfectly with the setting...full of intrigue, mature sophistication, fear, and a tiny bit of hope. its tone contrasts nicely with "severing the past," whose tone echoes its young characters. this is not a criticism of STP, just an acknowledgement that you're doing a splendid job of matching your stories' settings and tones with their characters. I hope others are enjoying these stories as much as I have been. I don't review much...I'd make a TERRIBLE beta...but know that your chapter updates brighten my day. Will you be posting these on theforce.net when they are complete? They'll receive an incredible reception there, I'm sure. Keep up the good work! -S.D.

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