Hello ... just wanted to let you know that I'm still regularly checking for updates. I hope you continue! This is a very promising beginning.
This is a lovely story. I can't wait for the upcoming conversation between Eleanor and Hook.
I loved Eleanor's reaction to the deadly results of the lark, "I want to go home." Oh, yes -- that rings true. Please continue, the stage has been set (very well, I might add) and now we want to know what happens when you combine one villain weary of Neverland with one young woman who is quickly learning that childish adventure is much less fun in reality than it seems in the abstract. So many possibilities.....
i can't wait for the next chapter, this is great, i love it.
Oh yay, I'm so glad you've updated. Very good, please continue. I agree with Overhill, I'm glad you didn't gloss over the violence and brutality inherent in armed battles.
Want adventure, get adventure and all the consequences. The book had its moments and themes of cruelty that the Disney and Broadway and television stories swept away. You have not swept the maway. Bravo! Looking forward to chapter 4....
I absolutly love it!! and i can't wait to read more.