Nice not to recreate the same lost boys as before or have Tinkerbell back)(definite misstakes made in "Hook" neither were canon and she talked....) Good job and getting the story fresh. On to chapter 3!
I do not agree with you on what you said about the film begin better than the book - but still your writing is lovely ;-) you are a real Pan-fan right?? i recognised that ice-breaking and bravery-scene at onc from the movie, but it was not difficult to see that you have read the book, too, because you are very true to the characters. I love it, please go on writing!!! PS: jason isaacs is the best Hook I have ever seen.
I loved Jason Isaacs as Captain Hook, and I like how you are writing him as well. I hope you continue - this is very good.