[Report This]Date: 04/22/2006 12:58 pm Title: Perchance to Dream of Neverland
This fits in well with the book and the movie. Eleanor and her dreams are done excellently! On to chapter 2 -- !
[Report This]Date: 07/05/2005 04:28 pm Title: Perchance to Dream of Neverland
This is very promising! I hope you continue. I've always found the book very melancholy, and the thought of a Wendy resigned to her everyday life makes sense. Please write more.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Hope you continue to enjoy the story. I'll try for regular updates. :-)
[Report This]Date: 07/03/2005 09:47 am Title: Perchance to Dream of Neverland
I think you've done a lovely job of setting up Eleanor's character and showing us the Wendy-who-did-grow-up. Peter's character also seems quite true to form, in that flighty way of his. I do pine for a more substantial Hook however - perhaps in the next segments when he and Eleanor/Peter/anyone else meet, we'll see some of the dashing fiend that Mr. Isaacs portrays so well. :)
Author's Response: I really wasn't sure if anyone would read here, and haven't posted at the other archives, but I've enjoyed reading at sycophant hex so much in the past, that I wanted to be sure that I would write something that would be worthy of this site.
I will try to make Hook more substantial. I could have made this chapter longer to include more information, but I hoped mainly to introduce Eleanor, and to set up the current situation and how Hook came back to life. Thanks for reviewing!