[Report This]Date: 08/13/2006 12:01 am Title: Captain Hook's Clothing Botique
Hello ... just wanted to let you know that I'm still regularly checking for updates. I hope you continue! This is a very promising beginning.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2006 10:37 am Title: Captain Hook's Clothing Botique
This is a lovely story. I can't wait for the upcoming conversation between Eleanor and Hook.
[Report This]Date: 07/31/2006 05:24 pm Title: Captain Hook's Clothing Botique
I loved Eleanor's reaction to the deadly results of the lark, "I want to go home." Oh, yes -- that rings true. Please continue, the stage has been set (very well, I might add) and now we want to know what happens when you combine one villain weary of Neverland with one young woman who is quickly learning that childish adventure is much less fun in reality than it seems in the abstract. So many possibilities.....
[Report This]Date: 05/23/2006 09:56 am Title: Captain Hook's Clothing Botique
i can't wait for the next chapter, this is great, i love it.
[Report This]Date: 04/30/2006 07:52 pm Title: Captain Hook's Clothing Botique
Oh yay, I'm so glad you've updated. Very good, please continue. I agree with Overhill, I'm glad you didn't gloss over the violence and brutality inherent in armed battles.
[Report This]Date: 04/22/2006 01:13 pm Title: Captain Hook's Clothing Botique
Want adventure, get adventure and all the consequences. The book had its moments and themes of cruelty that the Disney and Broadway and television stories swept away. You have not swept the maway. Bravo! Looking forward to chapter 4....
[Report This]Date: 04/22/2006 01:05 pm Title: It's Not A Dream
Nice not to recreate the same lost boys as before or have Tinkerbell back)(definite misstakes made in "Hook" neither were canon and she talked....) Good job and getting the story fresh. On to chapter 3!
[Report This]Date: 04/22/2006 12:58 pm Title: Perchance to Dream of Neverland
This fits in well with the book and the movie. Eleanor and her dreams are done excellently! On to chapter 2 -- !
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2006 12:34 am Title: Captain Hook's Clothing Botique
I absolutly love it!! and i can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 11/28/2005 01:54 pm Title: It's Not A Dream
I do not agree with you on what you said about the film begin better than the book - but still your writing is lovely ;-) you are a real Pan-fan right?? i recognised that ice-breaking and bravery-scene at onc from the movie, but it was not difficult to see that you have read the book, too, because you are very true to the characters. I love it, please go on writing!!! PS: jason isaacs is the best Hook I have ever seen.
[Report This]Date: 10/01/2005 12:52 pm Title: It's Not A Dream
I loved Jason Isaacs as Captain Hook, and I like how you are writing him as well. I hope you continue - this is very good.
[Report This]Date: 07/05/2005 04:28 pm Title: Perchance to Dream of Neverland
This is very promising! I hope you continue. I've always found the book very melancholy, and the thought of a Wendy resigned to her everyday life makes sense. Please write more.
Author's Response: Thanks very much! Hope you continue to enjoy the story. I'll try for regular updates. :-)
[Report This]Date: 07/03/2005 09:47 am Title: Perchance to Dream of Neverland
I think you've done a lovely job of setting up Eleanor's character and showing us the Wendy-who-did-grow-up. Peter's character also seems quite true to form, in that flighty way of his. I do pine for a more substantial Hook however - perhaps in the next segments when he and Eleanor/Peter/anyone else meet, we'll see some of the dashing fiend that Mr. Isaacs portrays so well. :)
Author's Response: I really wasn't sure if anyone would read here, and haven't posted at the other archives, but I've enjoyed reading at sycophant hex so much in the past, that I wanted to be sure that I would write something that would be worthy of this site.
I will try to make Hook more substantial. I could have made this chapter longer to include more information, but I hoped mainly to introduce Eleanor, and to set up the current situation and how Hook came back to life. Thanks for reviewing!