thankyouthankyouTHANKYOU for updating! I thought this story had been abandoned...what a treat! You wrote a remarkable story, Wendynat. Few authors can pull off a plot that doesn't involve canon characters, but you did it. I hope real life is treating you well, and you have the opportunity to write more stories in the future. Best wishes, SD
28-02-2007 02:13 Rated 10
Wendynat, thank you so much for updating this story; I thought it had been abandoned! You did a wonderful job with this chapter. I can't imagine how much work it must have been to blend this chapter so seemlessly with the rest of the story after such a long hiatus. Your resolution of one part of the storyline (crumbling Jedi code) was nicely complemented by introducing new elements like the fledgling relationship between N'oenar and Kerenne and Vader's arrival. I hope you continue to update this remarkable story. -S.D.
Interesting chapter. Is he soppose to embrace the dark side? Become a sith? Fight fire with fire?.........I personally believe that there isn't two side of the force. There is only two side of people, Dark and Light. We need each equally if we are to survive. Ignoring one side for the other strangthen part of you, but make you more vulnerable in others.
That's the great thing about Light sabers, they leave very little mess. Just a chared stump or severed torso. No blood and guts to worry about. It sound like the girl has some street smarts. How old is she?
Cheery, just like the movie.
thanks for another good chapter, wendynat. you're able to describe the monotony of long-distance space travel, while still maintaining some tension about the main storyline. the sense of confusion and frustration that N'oenar feels comes across nicely. using Force dreams to keep N'oenar up-to-date on events could be cliched, but his thoughts and feelings about what he's seeing prevents this from happening. keep up the good work!
i was really excited to see that you updated. I like how you've raised the tension this chapter. it really seems like "something" big is going to happen within the next chapter, and you've been keeping me on the edge of my seat. it's such a shame they can't figure out what "dim the light," "to smolder is key," and "to blaze is the sin" is. of course, I haven't figured out anything else that was in the dream (or the "madwoman's" ramblings), but it's so hard to believe that they haven't figured out that basic principle, yet. ah, dramatic irony...unless, of course, I've completely misinterpreted you -- but don't tell, I hate spoilers. :-) thanks again for the update! I really enjoy your work. If you're interested in a little SW plot bunny, let me know... -s.d.
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback and you taking the time to read and review :). I never give spoilers, don't worry. As far as the plot bunny - yes! I'm always open to bunnies! This story is pretty well set, as far as what will happen, but I'm always open to writing other stories :).
Great beginning, wendynat...did you just upload a story onto theforce.net? -s.d.
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for the review - I have Chapter 2 ready, just have to upload it here. And yes, I did - if you go to tfn's archive it's the first story listed in the most recent update :). It's called "Their Only Chance", and I'm very much in awe of the fabulous artwork Phurie made for the coverart! Thanks for the review!