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Reviewer: spikedust Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2008 07:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

thankyouthankyouTHANKYOU for updating! I thought this story had been abandoned...what a treat! You wrote a remarkable story, Wendynat. Few authors can pull off a plot that doesn't involve canon characters, but you did it. I hope real life is treating you well, and you have the opportunity to write more stories in the future. Best wishes, SD

Reviewer: spikedust Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2007 11:57 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen

28-02-2007 02:13 Rated 10

Wendynat, thank you so much for updating this story; I thought it had been abandoned! You did a wonderful job with this chapter. I can't imagine how much work it must have been to blend this chapter so seemlessly with the rest of the story after such a long hiatus. Your resolution of one part of the storyline (crumbling Jedi code) was nicely complemented by introducing new elements like the fledgling relationship between N'oenar and Kerenne and Vader's arrival. I hope you continue to update this remarkable story. -S.D.

Reviewer: ladyseveria Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/12/2006 10:45 pm Title: Chapter Seventeen

Wow, this is really good! I've really enjoyed the story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: spikedust Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 08:44 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen

I can't tell you how happy I was to see that you updated! thanks so much, I'm thoroughly enjoying this story (even after the re-reads!) :)

Reviewer: PinkCorsair Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 08:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen

See I was right, both side of the same whole. I'm glad you agree.

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Date: 11/18/2005 07:47 pm Title: Chapter Twelve

Damn I was hoping for a good catfight. Who's side would N'oenar be on? Maybe he'd just stand back and watch, hoping they tear each other clothes off. That's what most seventeen year olds would want.

Reviewer: PinkCorsair Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 07:11 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Interesting chapter. Is he soppose to embrace the dark side? Become a sith? Fight fire with fire?.........I personally believe that there isn't two side of the force. There is only two side of people, Dark and Light. We need each equally if we are to survive. Ignoring one side for the other strangthen part of you, but make you more vulnerable in others.

Reviewer: PinkCorsair Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/18/2005 06:06 pm Title: Chapter Ten

This poor kid, he has major women trouble already and he only been on his own a week. He'll never last.

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Date: 11/18/2005 04:41 pm Title: Chapter Nine

That nutty Jedi lady was just getting interesting when you stuck a knife in her. Was she a sith or a jedi? Or was she just a nut?

Reviewer: PinkCorsair Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 08:10 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Seventeen? Happy Birthday!!!! It looks like Kerenne and her brother mmight try and look up their Jedi relitives.

Reviewer: PinkCorsair Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 07:37 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Man, this guy needs to crossover to a Harry Potter Fanfic and steal some of Snape's Dreamless Drought Potion.

Reviewer: PinkCorsair Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 06:56 pm Title: Chapter Six

Well they're off the planet and safe as can be, right? What could possibly go wrong?

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Date: 11/16/2005 06:05 pm Title: Chapter Five

You know a lot of people forget that Palpatine was from Naboo. He was their senator before he became chancler. Other good reason not to go there.

Reviewer: PinkCorsair Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 05:20 pm Title: Chapter Four

And the laughs just keep on coming. I feel sorry for Toryndo, but how good of a jedi could he have been if he gets himself cornered in a bar?

Reviewer: PinkCorsair Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 04:43 pm Title: Chapter Three

Talking to starge women in bars. That usually doesn't end well.

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Date: 11/16/2005 03:27 pm Title: Chapter Two

Huston, we have a prophecy………… I can only guess the reason he was saved over the other was the knowledge of the seth he carries.

Reviewer: Pinkcorsair Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 04:27 am Title: Chapter One

That's the great thing about Light sabers, they leave very little mess. Just a chared stump or severed torso. No blood and guts to worry about. It sound like the girl has some street smarts. How old is she?

Reviewer: Pinkcorsair Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 04:06 am Title: Prologue

Cheery, just like the movie.

Reviewer: spikedust Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2005 10:04 pm Title: Chapter Eight

thanks for another good chapter, wendynat. you're able to describe the monotony of long-distance space travel, while still maintaining some tension about the main storyline. the sense of confusion and frustration that N'oenar feels comes across nicely. using Force dreams to keep N'oenar up-to-date on events could be cliched, but his thoughts and feelings about what he's seeing prevents this from happening. keep up the good work!

Reviewer: spikedust Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/07/2005 08:19 pm Title: Chapter Three

i was really excited to see that you updated. I like how you've raised the tension this chapter. it really seems like "something" big is going to happen within the next chapter, and you've been keeping me on the edge of my seat. it's such a shame they can't figure out what "dim the light," "to smolder is key," and "to blaze is the sin" is. of course, I haven't figured out anything else that was in the dream (or the "madwoman's" ramblings), but it's so hard to believe that they haven't figured out that basic principle, yet. ah, dramatic irony...unless, of course, I've completely misinterpreted you -- but don't tell, I hate spoilers. :-) thanks again for the update! I really enjoy your work. If you're interested in a little SW plot bunny, let me know... -s.d.

Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate the feedback and you taking the time to read and review :). I never give spoilers, don't worry. As far as the plot bunny - yes! I'm always open to bunnies! This story is pretty well set, as far as what will happen, but I'm always open to writing other stories :).

Reviewer: spikedust Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/27/2005 03:53 pm Title: Chapter One

Great beginning, wendynat...did you just upload a story onto theforce.net? -s.d.

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for the review - I have Chapter 2 ready, just have to upload it here. And yes, I did - if you go to tfn's archive it's the first story listed in the most recent update :). It's called "Their Only Chance", and I'm very much in awe of the fabulous artwork Phurie made for the coverart! Thanks for the review!

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