that was great
Another good one Glendia... I like the twist of him being the owner of the house... nice touch. I pictured myself in that hallway by means of your description.. and was able to recall some of my own encounters as a result of your touches...e.g.th escent of her hair, the way you described their movements etc.... vetry nice.
I get it all from Alex's perspective - the exhileration of getting caught masturbating, the masturbation fantasy come true, even the narcissistic self-confidence not really too shocked to move but too late to stop. I'll knock half a point off for "Autumn Sunrise" instead of "Auburn Sky" - and another for letting him cum before the other man walked into the room. I wonder if he would have endured the agony of withdrawing or polished himself off like I just did.
that story was both sexy and clever. It is nicely written and deserves a full woody
Ahhh, very good. Glinda you have done a marvelous job. More?!?!
I really loved this story. It's always nice to find an author that seems to be channeling your own fantasies, but doing a million times better than you could do yourself. I hope you write more about this pair.
time well spent indeed. hooray!
When I read "The Rules of Engagement" I thought, "wow, Glinda is great!". Now, after reading your other stories I can say "Glinda is wonderful, she rocks!". Really, your stories are great and you know very well how to write them ;)
Oh, it's perfect as it is, but I would not be unhappy if you continued the story with a few more chapters. There are other rooms to paint, after all. She doesn't need to find out who he is until the VERY end!
Holy Mackerel woman. My screen practically melted with this ficlet. Excellent, excellent job!!!! I do so enjoy your writing.
Found your fic via the Potterottica group :) Excellent work, your words had me hanging on all the way to the end. If you added more, it could make an excellent novel. One I'd surely buy.
Amazing. I loved it.
Glinda - wow - very hot with being obscene. You write such lovely lemons - it is so refreshing to have the heavy breathing without the Penthouse terminology. The character names sounded very familiar, but all I could find was an old Mission Impossible summary about a mobster - who are these people? Loved it. Es
Author's Response: No idea where the character names came from ;) They just popped into my head when I got to the end. Sorry, no hidden messages. Thanks and I hope you meant 'without being obscene' ~_* Glinda
very very hot... and so good!
Author's Response: Thanks dami, hope I perked up your day.
Very good. I like the description of the sex, it was *Hot* and well written. I especially like the ending, cute twist and a few well chosen words.
Yes, it really paid to have a hand in building your own house. It was time well spent.
Author's Response: Thanks Pearle, I would love to claim I chose those words on purpose, but alas it is just coincidence. Glad you like the sex!!