Reviews For Obadiah's Angel
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2008 01:34 am Title: Chapter 21 b

Well, that was a very pleasant surprize and about time too! I admired how the whole 'ritual' of the meeting between Angelique and Obadiah went, then her parents returned to the room. They sure don't do that nowadays... Obadiah is posittively on Cloud Nine right now, and so is Angelique. She sure got a dressing down by her mom when she grabbed hold of Obi's arm after the church services. I guess in those days, women are to behave like proper ladies. I'm not knocking it, but it shows how different generations behaved in their youth. And Obadiah did'nt seem to be bothered by Angelique holding on to his arm. I'm glad that they'll start 'dating', or as they called it back then, courting. I will say that Angeliwue is one lucky girl! Oh and by the way, what is the significenceof her nickname, Sunny? Of course, anyone named Angelique would have nicknames such as Angie, or Angel, I'm just curious. Please keep up the good work, Becky! I totally love this story! If I may say so, Obadiah Rocks!! lol

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you are still enjoying the story..Yes Dorthea did give her what for, It was most unseemly to be forward like that during that time, the MAN always made the first move, regarding courting! Well Sunny is just what Edward calls Angelique, I just wanted something her daddy would call her, informal, as Daddys girl...you know! and she is the sunshine in his life! So he calls her Sunny! I'm so glad you like my story...and I agree, OBI ROCKS!!!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2008 01:13 am Title: An Invitation to Dinner

Another fine chapter! And I'm glad that Obadiah's mom will be in attendance at the church service. Obviously introductions will be in order...I think it's cute how Angelique blushes every time she's in the company of Obadiah. Of course, he's doing some serious blushing too! It is terrible how the flu takes everyone so quickly back then. Thank goodness we have a vaccine to at leats lessen the blow of getting it. You mentioned about that heart problem when you were a child, I am glad that you outlived the 3 years they gave you to live, and that you're here writing wonderful stories and running that fine AR group! And I'm only 3 years younger than you, Becky! I'll turn 50 this coming December...Yeah, I'll be waiting for all those 'Over the Hill' jokes. The way I see it, age is only a number. I may be turning 50, but I still feel like a 30 year old... Again great story and keep up the awesome work! Oh, before I go, What is bay rum?? When I read that, my immediate thoughts were 'Obi you crazy fool! Why on earth would you splash yourself up with rum?' Just wondering! ;0)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm glad you are still enjoying the story. Yes Esther will be going with Obi to church. Yes they told mom to have another child right away! STRANGE!! I'm glad I'm still here too, and able to write, I just LOVE Obadiah..Ah yes, Bay Rum, let me get the link for you to look at..http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bay_rum There you go!!! It's not much to read but it does explain!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2008 12:41 am Title: Afternoon Tea 20b

Well, I figured that one out! I was going to complain about the submit review thing, that it should be at the end of the story instead of up top. But, I solved my own problem..My bad! As for the chapter, excellent! It was sad that Mrs. Rhys' aunt was killed in the buggy accident and that the two Rhys women had to witness it. But LUckily for them, Obadiah came along to confort them. The parties seem to go well, that Dorthea's has to pair up the 'Dream couple'.And the chess games with Edward, keeps Obadiah within eyesight of Angelique. If only they could like 'hang out somehere and try to really get to know each other, instaed of exchanging hurried glances. Okay, I am getting impatient for these two to come together... Anyway, great story and keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yes, I had to do that in order to get Obadiah in a "comforting pastor" mode so the family could see how compassionate he is..Yes the parties are helpful, and some interesting things are going to be forthcoming. LOL!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2008 12:16 am Title: Afternoon Tea

Another fine chapter as always! This one had me shaking my head, because of the two principal charecters, Angelique and Obadiah. If there were ever two people who acted like two lovesick teenagers, it's these two! I suppose that the time period reflects the behavior of the young people, everyone is so polite and mannerly, no one's taking anyone behind the barn for alittle 'Somethin' somethin', if you know what I mean;0) Having said all that I have to say that these two are so cute it is rediculous! I just adore how Obi thinks about, dreams about, whatever, about Angelique, and she is doing the same! Even drawing a sketch of him. I have to giggle at Angelique hiding the portrait from her mom as well as the parchment with her name, and his. I suppose back then, making a big fuss over a cute pastor was taboo. Anyway, I hope they can get together and try to act like, um, normal adults...Um, how old is Angelique and how old is Obadiah? I don't think I read that in the begiining of the story. Not that their ages bother me, it's just the fact that Obi's acting like a lovesick puppy! Quite unsual for a man...But he is one cute man! *grins mischieviously* ;0)

Author's Response: Yeah, everything must be on the up and up, no hanky panky...YET! LOL!! Stay with me, it will happen, but nothing too risque! Angelique is 19, and Obi is 29...10 years difference! Yes it is unusual for a man to act Lovesick, BUT Obi has NEVER BEEN in love before, and sooooooooooooo!!!!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2008 01:30 am Title: Second Chances

I really enjoyed this chapter, and sadly, it will be the only one I'll read tonight, since last night,(Saturday), I stayed up to watch Robin Hood, Prince of Theives, which did'nt go off till 2am! And I watched it in bed! Back to Obadiah; *Happy Dance!* he got to see Angelique!! Funny, the Doctor was'nt introduced to Obadiah, or else he would have put 2 and 2 together. I'm glad he recovered from his flu. Thank goodness for modern medicine! Speaking of which, I watched 'Something the Lord Made', tonight on HBO, which explains why I can only read one chapter of your story tonight. I went all through my e-mails after the movie, which I cried over, great movie, and Alan was fantastic! I apologize for only reading one chapter, but I do want to catch up on some sleep, after my midnight to 2 am movie watching! ;0) Thank you for a great story, Becky and keep up the good work! Also, Thanks for recommending Cyn's story over on FF! It's a great story and I'll continue to read hers too!

Author's Response: WOW, You did have a Marathon didn't you!! STLM is VERY SPECIAL TO ME!! You see I have Tetralogy of Fallot, and the Dr.s told my parents I would not live past 3 years..I am 52...Glad you are still enjoying the story..Just finished chapter 43 last night and will start on 44 today I hope!! (((HUGS)))

Reviewer: Angela Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/25/2008 11:03 pm Title: The Courtship Progresses

My goodness! What a chapter and such an erotic dream he had. I do hope his mother will be alright. Well done Becky! P.S. And don't think I didn't notice the date of his birthday and middle name *Smirks*

Author's Response: Thanks Angie...Yeah I'm sure she will be alright! LOL...Glad you liked his dream...And I see you noticed his BD and name! LOL NOT A COINCIDENCE!! LOL!!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/24/2008 12:29 am Title: A Prayer Answered 18 b

Another wonderful chapter! and Obadiah's finally going to Hammersmith and his new parish. And hopefully to meet his angel! ;0) He seems proficient at church finance, and weasled out a deal with the commitee. It seems Obadiah's life is just about settled. All he needs now is someone to share it with! I'd volunteer, but alas! It is only fiction! And anyway, I maybe old enough to be his mother!! ONce again, another fine chapter! Keep up the good work! (I must be getting tired, again, I can't seem to hit the right keys, dang it!)

Author's Response: Yes Hammersmith is going to be his NEW BEGINNING!!! Bless his heart!! YAY!!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2008 11:27 pm Title: A Prayer Answered

I'm glad that Obadiah's mom got to hear his sermon. And she seems to be very proud of him, as every mother is with her children. And she likes her new home, which is nice. And it is bright and cheerful and her room overlooks the park. It sounds like she is contented and that she has visits from Obi to look forward to. At the beginning, Kennth made a plea for rain from Our LOrd, but, He has'nt delivered yet...And Obadiah is still pining for Angelique. Would'nt it be something if his blind date is Angelique Rhys?? Oh the possibilities!!! And you mentioned in one of your posts, about your story being boring as to make me sleepy? No way!! I think it was the long day, and also the fact that reading a GOOD story, relaxes me. I always read a book in bed, and 9 times out of 10, I'll be asleep before even finishing the first paragraph! Or I'll watch tv, which puts me to sleep too. I have a timer on the tv... I really enjoy your story Becky and I'll hang with you and Obadiah until the end!! ;0)

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this chapter, Yes Esther is very proud of Obadiah..Yes he is still pinning away for his Angel..Ah ha, I know the feeling, sit down to read the paper and BAM..I'm asleep!! LOL!!! Keep reading, it only gets better...Oh you should read Because You're Mine on FFN, by Ms. Padfoot...Excellent story one to get caught up in for sure!! Pimping my Friend Cyn (group-co mom)

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2008 01:04 am Title: A Hard Lesson Learned 17b

That was a wonderful sermon Obadiah gave at the Bishop's church. Very inspirational. And the chapter was also inspirational.Obadiah's wish to have his mom nearby came true. He'll have Betsy as his new housekeeper, he's starting to get back to normal after that incident. And I love how you describe Obadiah's physique, as he's working in the gardens. Very sexy! ;0) Now,my eyes are getting heavy, like Obadiah's as he's reading his book, so I shall catch up with the good Reverand tomorrow!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, glad you enjoyed the sermon, Glad i could brighten your day with my description of Obi!! Keep reading it gets better, of course it gets MORE risque...lol

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/23/2008 12:36 am Title: A Hard Lesson Learned

That is really aweet, that Obadiah got to see his mother and that she remembered him after he told her who he was. I'm curious as to how he'll carry that box home, that his mom gave him. I'm glad that he went to see his mom, because, as you know, things can change. And I hope he is able to give that ring to Angelique...Boy, I'm really rooting for those two to get together! lol Great story as always! keep up the good work, Becky! ;0)

Author's Response: Yes he will be very careful with the box...He and his mom are getting along well and will continue to grow closer!! stay tuned..

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2008 01:03 am Title: The Faux Pas Chapter 16b

Why is it that there's always someone out there to ruin someone else's life? I felt bad for Obadiah that he had to leave the parish, because of one evil little tramp!( I could have used a stronger term, but I did'nt want to embarress you,Becky, but you get my point) I hope Obadiah finds happiness somewhere. He seems like a sweetheart and deserves more than the likes of Gertrude Oleson! Another great chapter! I'll read more tomorrow, it's one am where I live, in the East coast, and my eys are scratchy...I'll go to bed and dream of Obadiah! ;0)

Author's Response: Yes, poor Obi!! But better things are ahead!!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/22/2008 12:27 am Title: The Faux Pas

Oh my! What a trip that chapter was!! Personally, I think Mrs Oleson deserves a good slap if you ask me. Poor Obadiah! And yet he was naive to the fact that the woman would pull such a stunt. Now, he'll have to go back and get his coat and hat. Unless she brings them back to him. And if he acts angrily towards her, sahe'll get him where it hurts, I'm sure. Thank goodness for Betsy! At least she warned Obadiah. And she did'nt help her misstress up from the floor. I woulds have been rotflmao at that one! Great story, very amusing, I enjoy each chapter and look forward to reading the next one.

Author's Response: Yes Betsy really came thru for Obi, she is a good person!! Glad you are still with me!!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2008 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 15, Part 2, Partings

Another lovely chapter! And how crude of Mrs. Oleson to wear such a risque dress! No wonder Obadiah looked embarressed. I'm kind of glad she did'nt return, it would have been an uncomfortable evening for everyone involved. And Obadiah's gift to Kenneth was so sweet. And Kenneth telling him to get a haircut. Looks okay to me! (I saw the pic of Obadiah over at our favorite AR site. A very cheerful chapter, after the last ones concerning the Finnerty boy. BTW, I learned a new word, in your story..Aperitif, which is an alchoholic drink served before a meal as an appetizer. I had to look that up on the Online Webster's site. Thank God for online dictionaries, huh? ;0)

Author's Response: Awww thanks, glad you are still enjoying it!! Yes Obi is letting his hair grow out...

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2008 01:32 am Title: Partings

Again another fine chapter! The shoe shining thing is interesting. I assume the ladies' shoes are also shined. This in line with what folks do today for a grieving family. Usually, they provide food and stuff like that, so the family does'nt have to worry about eating...Sometimes people who are in moarning won't eat. You have to make them est for the strength. I remember when my mom passedaway in 1995, our neighbors boaght lots of food to our house. Even a fully cooked turkey! Or was it a chicken? It was very generous and they did the same when my dad passed too. Of course some brought yummy desserts too! Back to the story. I'm glad the Bishop told Obadiah about Mrs. Oleson, but it seems Obadiah's turning a deaf ear to what Kenneth is saying. But, Obadiah did say he would watch carefully for any signs of 'monkey business'. The service for Little Michael went well, and Obadiah did well in his first funeral. Of course, afterwards, Mrs. Oleson was having the hots for Obadiah again. Like she deserves what he has to offer? Hmmmph! Okay, I'm off to bed now, great chapter as always!

Author's Response: Yes the shoe shining was like our present day taking of food..Yes poor Obi, he is so trusting...

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/21/2008 12:50 am Title: Meetings and Mourning

Well, I must confess that I fell asleep reading this chapter last night, so I'm refreshing my memory so that I canleave a proper review. And no the story does not bore me! I just had a long day. Obadiah was quite broken up by the passing of little Michael. I'm sure he and many like him in the Lord's work today, must feel pain whenever a child loses his life to some thankless disease. It is a tough loss to bear and thankfully Kenneth was there to comfort Obadiah. It helped that he was there on that vist, or else Obadiah would have had to face the boy's death alone. And then there's MRs Oleson. Is she a pip or what?! Kudos to the Bishop for standing up to her. I'm surprized Obadiah did'nt take notice of her shenanigans. Some men are totally blind sometimes! lol Once again, another fine chapter! And I just love this story! ;0)

Author's Response: Oh my, I hope the story didn't put you to sleep!!! LOL!!! Kenneth really told her good!!! He is watching out for OBI!!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 11:10 pm Title: Reminiscing

Another outstanding chapter! Most of it, was the two men visiting people in the parish. Obadiah was touched by young MIchael's condition. He seemed upset. It is always hard when a child is near death. To lose a child at any age, but especially at the beginng of their lives is especially hard. And the parents seem to blame themselves for not doing more, even though they do more than what's called for to help their child. It sounds like Kenneth wants to move to Acton....He and Obadiah are great feiends, and of course, I'm wondering when Obadiah's going ask about Angelique. I suppose we'll have to be patient...

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm glad you are still enjoying it! Yes Kenneth is looking for a change..

Reviewer: Angela Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 08:46 pm Title: The Courtship Begins

Oh Becky I'm so glad you updated! Obadiah and Angelique are so sweet together. I look forward to when you update again and see how thier love grows even stronger for one an other.

Author's Response: Thanks, They are cute aren't they! LOL sigh!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 01:10 am Title: The Bishop Visits

Another wonderful chspter! And you mention two of my favorite scents! I love the scent of honeysuckle and lilacs, as well as hyacinths. My brother has a tree called a varberatum, I hope that is the correct spelling. That tree has a beautiful scent that you can smell before you even see the tree itself! Okay, I have to metion that when Obadiah and Keeneth were looking at that shield, the way you described it. made me think of the Slytherin shield, and of Severus Snape! Very curious! I really thought he and Bishop UNter would have discussed Obadiah's lusting for Angelique...I suppose they will talk it over at breakfast. You're doing a wonderful job with this story and I'm looking forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Yes I made the shield that way for a purpose... Obi is a LITTLE Slytherine...LOL!!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/19/2008 12:45 am Title: The Voice

How fitting that this chapter would be titled 'The Voice'. And Mrs Todd's exasperated attempts to explain why all of the ladies in the parish act in such a way towards Obadiah. Then saying that it's his voice. Not to mention that he's darn handsome! Poor Betsy nearly had a stroke over him! And I enjoyed your description of a shirtless Obadiah, as he worked with the gardners to move that tree stump. I wonder if he is really shirtless in the Barchester Chronicals? I'm waiting to hear from my library to see if they can get it through interlibrary loan...I am so looking forward to deeing it! And after seeing the pics of Obadiah on ARWOWAM, I would like him better with out that maccassa oil...Geez, is that like a mousse or gel that men used in that time period? And I'm still having a giggle over the wigs the men sometimes wore, especially the judges and politians. I've heard the term Powdered wigs, at one time or another... Great story and chspter, and I apologize for the long review!

Author's Response: Oh yes, Obi's voice...SIGH!! ALAN'S voice is like Warm Honey...sigh...No he doesn't remove his shirt in BC...Oh yeah you need to watch BC, you will see how I changed Obi to a sweetheart!! LOL

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 12:45 am Title: Troubling Thoughts

Well, I am glad that Obadiah enjoyed his chocolate cake, and with milk of course! A man after my own heart! Now for the story, another wonderful chapter. He's getting into the swing of things, his first funeral,(sadly) and trying to make time to see Mrs Oleson, which he seems reluctant to do. He should it and get it over with. As for his thoughts on Angelique, I ad to giigle at the word 'masher', is that like a cad? or some quirky slang term for one who plays the field. Still, he is feeling quite perturbed over the situation. Patience is a virtue, Obadiah...Give her time, dear boy! ;0)

Author's Response: Glad you are still reading, Yes masher is like a cad, someone who turns their attentions onto someone who doesn't wish them to! BUT fear not!! Angelique does like our young preacher!!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 12:30 am Title: Widow’s Row

First of all, let me say that I was thrilled to read that Obadiah favors chocolate cake...It's my favorite too! IN fact I favor anything chocolate, lol. Back to the story, another exceptional chapter. He seems to be adapting well to his new parish, and the people like him. It was admirable of him to agree to have services for all of the ladies who could'nt make it to Sunday services. And MRs Todd dotes on Obadiah constantly, making sure that he is well fed and all that. I have no complaints about this chapter, good luck with the next one.

Author's Response: Ah yes, Obadiah does like chocolate, I just had to interject one of my favorite desserts into the story! LOL!! Yes as you will see Mrs. Todd is quite the "MOTHER" to Obadiah!!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 01:00 am Title: Dinner With The Devil

Well, the dinner with Mrs Oleson went well. She did'nt make a pass at the Reverand. But, Like Mrs Todd told Obadiah, Gertrude must be watched carefully. And Angelique is still on his mind. Poor fellow! He's like a lovesick puppy!! ;0) Great chapter, as always!

Author's Response: Glad you are still enjoying it! Have 2 chapters waiting to get betad, hope they pass muster!! Yes Mrs. Oleson is a bad bad lady! LOL

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 12:43 am Title: Mrs. Oleson’s Plan

Well, I have to title this chapter, 'Hot for Preacher', lol I don't know if you've heard of the band, Van Halen, but they had a song, 'Hot for Teacher', a little play on words...I apologize for the useless drabble, lol Anyway, Great chapter, Obviously Gertrude wants Obadiah, bad, and she does ssound like trouble, if you ask me. In fact, is'nt that the reason that Obadiah left Barchester? Because of Mrs Proudie? I'm just assuming this... And it's a shame he's going to Gertrude's for dinner and not Mrs. Todds. Oh well, we'll see what happens.

Author's Response: LOL, Yes I have heard of the song and band!! You are right Gert does WANT Obi!! She is trouble. Obi Left Barchester because his affections were spurned.. (GASP) who could turn him down??

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 12:30 am Title: His New Parish

Well, it looks like the good Reverand has a soft spot for Angelique and he misses her. How sweet! Obadiah seems like such a sweet man. I hope someday to find a copy of The Barchester Chronicles, so I can 'meet' Obadiah Slope. Not knowing much about the charecter, and reading this story, is undaunting, since,I'm reading about him for the first time. And I don't usually like to correct an author on their spelling, but you mentioned the Chinese Coy in the pond, The word is spelled K-O-I, Koi. As you know, they are a type of fish, mainly an overgrown spotted goldfish, IMHO, lol. My brother has a pond at his home, and he has koi in the pond that have grown into like huge fish! They keep having babies! He told me today, when I visited him for his birthday, (It's actually tomorrow, but I wanted to give him his card in person, since this is the first time, that I would see him on his B-Day, I live in Pa, as does he. We live 10 miles from each other,he has 20 acres of ground and has gardens galore!) Anyway, I hope you did'nt mind the correction, Becky. Great story, I love it! P.S. I'm Florence, from your Alan Rickman group, Alan Rickman World of Writers and More...Over there, I'm Angelfox20032000! ;0)

Author's Response: Ahhhhhhhh, Hello there!! Thank you for the correct spelling, I shall go and change it pronto....Glad you are still with me, and reading the story...

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/14/2008 12:01 am Title: Meeting The Committee

Another fine chapter! That woman Gertrude, seemed to have a slight attitude at first, towards Obadiah, but after he gave her a glare and a suitable response, she softened up. At least Obadiah is polite in asking where the parsonage is. And his welcoming commitee seemed nice, with the exception of Gertrude... Great story so far, Becky! Oh, I love gazing into a nice fireplace! Of course, like Obadiah, I get sleepy, watching the fire...

Author's Response: Thank you for the review..YES Gert is a problem! LOL! Obi has to keep on his toes @ her!! Glad you are enjoying the story...

You must login (register) to review.