[Report This]Date: 12/07/2005 09:15 pm Title: Place of Safety
Oh My, glad she got the bullet out of him, lead poisoning is not good! wow Paramedic and Nurse...He really got a break there....Glad he is going to be alright!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the comment. Well had to heal him as well as save him somehow,no way could he go to a hospital.
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2005 09:07 pm Title: The Narrow Escape
WOW, smart move using the window washer cradle!...Glad that they had the option of going out the window! Great chapter...on to the next!!!
Author's Response: I am glad you liked that option, I thought of a few ways to save Hans. It wasn't easy as we see him go out of the window. So knowing those tall buildings have window cleaners cradles, it seemed the best option.
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2005 09:01 pm Title: Saving a Terrorist
Oh Poor Hans...Thank goodness for THEA...Glad she is helping him, and not turning him in.. Interesting chapter...can't wait to see what is in store next, and HOW she gets them out of the building!
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you are enjoying the story. Yes he was lucky Thea was there.
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2005 08:43 pm Title: Exploring
OH MY!! That was ONE HOT daydream she had....Loved this chapter...WOW On to the next!
Author's Response: Well Hans does tend to inspire a lot of women that way;-) I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2005 08:15 pm Title: Laying Down the Law
Ohhh, so forceful.. LOVE Han's attitude.. Could actually see his expressions...Great chapter...looking forward to the next one! ta!
Author's Response: Thank you, I tried to keep him in character. I don't hink he would easily become a lovey-dovey type of guy. Glad you are enjoying the story, thank you for the comment.
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2005 05:24 pm Title: Gate Crashers
He is sexy, I don't blame her. His voice would have any womans hormones racing!
Author's Response: Yes I agree. Glad you are enjoying it, I hope you will continue to read it. Thank you for commenting.
[Report This]Date: 11/15/2005 02:03 pm Title: New Job and New Life
Oh, I like the new ending!
Cyndi
Author's Response: Thank you I am glad you like it. Should make for an interesting sequel if I get around to writing one...
[Report This]Date: 10/25/2005 09:46 am Title: The Escape
Oh this is so exciting, I do hope she doesn't get caught, but then if she doesn't she won't be meeting Hans! Oh MY! Excellent 2nd chapter, so looing forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you, hope you enjoy the following chapters as well.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 08:39 pm Title: Gate Crashers
Weehee! Fantastic sheena!
Author's Response: Thanks, it is nice to know people are enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 07:31 pm Title: Gate Crashers
Woo Hoo. Great Start. :) Hans does have a very sexy voice. (sigh). You and your betas did a great job. Looking forward to the rest of the chapters. Thanks for posting it for us to read.
Sunny
Author's Response: Thanks. I am glad you are enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 05:34 pm Title: Gate Crashers
Oh My!! I just read this, and I cannot wait until you post again! This is great..I LOVE Hans..So glad to have come across this story..Looking forward to more..
Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying it. The story is complete I just need to get my beta readers to help with it. then get it validated. It is 12 chapters altogether.
Author's Response: Thank you. I am glad you are enjoying it. The story is complete I just need to get my beta readers to help with it. then get it validated. It is 12 chapters altogether.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 10:19 am Title: Gate Crashers
It is a wonderful story. Congrats! I knew you could do it.
Cyndi
Author's Response: Thanks Cyndi! I couldn't have got it validated without the help you and Jesse gave me. I would not even have thought of posting it, without the encouragement you and Jesse gave me.
[Report This]Date: 10/24/2005 01:39 am Title: Gate Crashers
Way to go! I knew you could do it! Congratulations on a great story!
Author's Response: Thanks Jesse, I couldn't have got it here without your help and encouragement.