[Report This]Date: 06/30/2008 12:32 am Title: New Job and New Life
Really enjoyed this story, and the end was a real breathtaker! Didn't see that coming. Would you mind if I borrow your Swiss compound idea? I've been working on a Gruber fanfic; it may actually be the first one I submit, although I've been working on some other genres for about a year.
[Report This]Date: 12/27/2005 01:19 pm Title: New Job and New Life
Sheena you evil snotball! There'd better be a sequel to this, I want to see Thea get give Hans some major payback!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL... Now you didn't expect Hans to be lovey-dovey now did you? I will give a sequel a go when I have finished my George story.
[Report This]Date: 12/14/2005 08:16 pm Title: New Job and New Life
Oh wow, you can't be serius. This can't be the end. What happend to Thea next???
Author's Response: Well I did warn that Hans is ruthless as he is in the film. I may write a sequel when I get a chance. I want to get some of my other wip's finished and posted first though. Hope you enjoyed the story.
[Report This]Date: 12/14/2005 07:58 pm Title: Life Goes On
Ohh no.
Author's Response: Glad I got you...
[Report This]Date: 12/14/2005 06:56 pm Title: New Home, New Life
Sounds beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks I am glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 12/14/2005 01:15 am Title: Fleeing the Country
OOOh, exciting!! He wouldn't have let her go, she knew too much.
Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad you are enjoying it. You are right, he is too ruthless to have it any other way.
[Report This]Date: 12/09/2005 05:03 am Title: Lust Grows
You are so good at making the story so real, every little detail. I like how they go to the bathroom like real people. But how did they manage his first bath?? And why was she still wearing her party dress the next morning?? And what is Kedgeree?? Is it like farina??
Author's Response: Glad you like that, I do try to keep the stories real. She gave him a sponge bath, so literally just used a bowl of water and washd him all over. She wasn't still wearing her party dress in the morning, she had fallen asleep in th chair so had simply not got undressed until he woke her in the early hours of the morning. Kedgeree is a mixture of smoked fish, rice and hard boiled egg. Which in part shows her British roots as it is often served as breakfast, especially in hotels or by well off families. ;-) Thanks for the comments, hope my answers have helped.
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 11:42 pm Title: Place of Safety
Good technical info, I have never heard of Ketamine.
Author's Response: It is used quite a bit here in the UK. I believe it was originally used for animals like horses, I am not sure when its use became widespread for people or even if it is in the USA, but it was the one I could think of that did what I wanted without hitting him with more morphine. I do tend to research my stories to try to keep as much as I can factual.
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 09:20 pm Title: The Narrow Escape
That was close! Hans was funny. I am grinning now. lol.
Author's Response: Thanks I am glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 08:21 pm Title: New Job and New Life
I liked this story. You kept Hans in character and very hot. I hope you write a sequel. Thea must avenge herself. I am kind of mad at men who are bastards right now. Great job with the story.
Sunny
Author's Response: Thank you, I am really glad that you liked the story. I will certainly try to come up with a sequel at some stage.
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 08:15 pm Title: Life Goes On
Oh no. We all knew Hans was cruel, but poor Thea. I must see how it ends for them.
Sunny
Author's Response: Yes he is, I see him as being a calculating and ruthless man. Yes I think he could be cruel if it was needed.
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 08:06 pm Title: New Home, New Life
Everything seems to be perfect. Hope it stays that way.
Sunny
Author's Response: I couldn't possibly comment. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 08:03 pm Title: Fleeing the Country
Leaving everything behind would be hard for me even if it were for Hans. LOL. I liked the bath scene.
Sunny
Author's Response: Well I guess if you are single it is a little easier. Glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 07:57 pm Title: Lust Grows
Smart girl "Thea debated leaving Hans with them on, but decided to take them off. It would give her a chance to get a good look at him." Another hot chapter. I am sure she is in for an adventure now.
Sunny
Author's Response: LOL... Well lets face it if you had an unconscious Hans Gruber in your home wouldn't you take the opportunity? ;-)
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 07:51 pm Title: Place of Safety
This is perfect "Like most men, he hadn’t noticed that Thea had been wearing her small bag across her shoulders all the time." Good thing Thea was a paramedic. Wouldn't want Hans to die. I liked the swearing in German. Good touch.
Sunny
Author's Response: Thank you I am glad you are enjoying the story. It is nice to know people are reading and enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 07:48 pm Title: The Narrow Escape
I really like your Thea. Very smart and resourceful. On to the next chapter.
Sunny
Author's Response: Thank you, I wanted her to be smart and strong willed without looking like a "Mary-Sue". Hopefully I achieved that.
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 07:46 pm Title: Saving a Terrorist
Yeah. This is how the movie should have gone. Love it.
Sunny
Author's Response: Thank you I am glad you agree. Itis such a shame that the film didn't allow him to live they could have used him in later films.
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 07:43 pm Title: Exploring
Wow very hot. I like this line the best "“Other parts of me are very hard, though.”
Sunny
Author's Response: well I did think it was about time I spiced things up... LOL...
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 07:38 pm Title: Laying Down the Law
You have Hans down perfectly. I am so glad you put this in "Hans began to hum his favourite tune, ‘Ode to Joy.’ " I loved this music in the film.
Great job so far. On to chapter three
Sunny
Author's Response: Thank you I am glad that I have Hans in character. Yes I love 'Ode to Joy' as well. Glad you are enjoying the story.
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 07:35 pm Title: The Escape
I like this line "I have to keep my mind on staying alive. If I daydream like that again before I am safe, I will be captured, or worse!" Don't we all have that problem when Hans is around.
Great story. Sorry it took so long to get to chapter two. I will move on to chapter three.
Sunny
Author's Response: I agree he is certainly a man to inspire daydreams. ;-) Glad you are enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 12/08/2005 12:07 am Title: Saving a Terrorist
Great way to save Hans!! Thea is a big outspoken for someone facing a dangerous man isn't she?
Author's Response: Well I wanted to show that she was a strong woman. I also think some people do get mouthy in dangerous situations it is a way to make themselves seemmore confident and unafraid. At least that was my reasoning behind it. Glad you are enjoying the story. Thank you for the comment.
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2005 10:47 pm Title: Exploring
LOL! She has some imagination doesn't she?
Author's Response: LOL... Yes she does. But then from what I have seen of Hans Gruber fans he does have that affect on a lot of them.;-)
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2005 10:43 pm Title: Lust Grows
Good for her! glad she decided to go with him.. I wonder if she suspected her demise if she'd said NO!
Author's Response: I left that for the reader to decide ...;-)
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2005 10:39 pm Title: Laying Down the Law
It's like being there!
Author's Response: That is great, I try to give the reader enough information to be able to imagine being there. Glad I succeeded with this chapter for you.
[Report This]Date: 12/07/2005 10:33 pm Title: The Escape
WOW! My heart is thumping in MY chest!
Author's Response: Thank you I am glad you are getting into the story.