Reviews For Unhappy Surprise
Reviewer: Roberta_Grundy Signed 
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Date: 05/02/2006 10:38 pm Title: Unhappy Surprise
[Report This]Date: 05/02/2006 10:38 pm Title: Unhappy Surprise
Oh what a sad and provoking story. Well done!
Author's Response: :o) Thank you.
Reviewer: June W Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2005 09:29 pm Title: Unhappy Surprise
[Report This]Date: 04/11/2005 09:29 pm Title: Unhappy Surprise
Ouch! You did a wonderful job depicting his pain. I would never have guessed that you had five "mandatory" random sentences to include - it flowed very naturallyWell done!
Author's Response: Thank you June, I always appreciate a review from you. Glad you liked this piece.
Reviewer: aerynfire Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/02/2005 04:05 pm Title: Unhappy Surprise
[Report This]Date: 04/02/2005 04:05 pm Title: Unhappy Surprise
Wow! I loved this, the emotion was so palpital and tension so thick you could cut it with a knife. His fear...wow...you really captured his fear...fear of change, of the unknown... Excellent piece! ~Aeryn
Author's Response: Thanks :o) I'm honestly surprised at how well this turned out myself.