Great work! I like it. The tenor is full of hope and comfort and hope really is something this world needs.
Thanks for this one. It's very melancholy and nicely worded.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Very good. I like the descriptions, you really make it easy to imagine the clinic atmosphere. I liked the inner monologue, too and the contrast between what "Powder Blue" says and actually feels... I think no woman (or hardly any) would take this decision light-heartedly.
Just detected a minor typo: envied them and they way they (the way they...)
Author's Response: Thank you! This is my very first original fiction. And I'll fix that typo straight away.
I liked the dialect and the descriptions. I'm not sure about the end though. It's probably just hard to get that across. It sounds a bit as if she defends date rape but then I probably just misunderstood. She always blamed herself and so she blames Lizzie, too. The characters and settings are very good though.
Great!! I loved this story. Your ideas are witty and original and I love the descriptions. Bravo! You so put a smile on my face!!
Very nice story and great descriptions...I love Alan as Metatron, one of his best roles.
Author's Response: I was just fascinated by what angels must secretly think about all that stuff they can't have. glad you liked it. thanks for reviewing
wooo-hooo! Nice one, congrats for making the featured fics! :-)
Author's Response: i was i bit chuffed!