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Member Since: 12/24/2004
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Rated:
Categories: Orphan
Characters: None
Genres: None
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 0
Wordcount: 0 - Hits: 0
Complete?: No - Published: 12/31/1969 - Last Updated: 12/31/1969
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Date: 12/27/2004 Title: None

Great work! I like it. The tenor is full of hope and comfort and hope really is something this world needs.

A brief examination of the progression of love.

Rated: C
Categories: Poetry
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 100 - Hits: 675
Complete?: No - Published: 01/02/2005 - Last Updated: 01/03/2005
Reviewer: snapeaddict Signed star star star star half star
Date: 01/07/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Silver

Thanks for this one. It's very melancholy and nicely worded.

Author's Response: Thank you.

A young woman enters through one door and waits to go through another.

Rated: B
Categories: Short Stories
Characters: None
Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 747 - Hits: 823
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/05/2005 - Last Updated: 01/05/2005
Reviewer: snapeaddict Signed star star star star half star
Date: 01/07/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting Between the Doors

Very good. I like the descriptions, you really make it easy to imagine the clinic atmosphere. I liked the inner monologue, too and the contrast between what "Powder Blue" says and actually feels... I think no woman (or hardly any) would take this decision light-heartedly. Just detected a minor typo: envied them and they way they (the way they...)

Author's Response: Thank you! This is my very first original fiction. And I'll fix that typo straight away.

Things are not always as they appear. Just because one person says something is so, does not make it true for everyone.

Rated: L
Categories: Short Stories
Characters: None
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3264 - Hits: 121
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/05/2005 - Last Updated: 01/05/2005
Reviewer: snapeaddict Signed star star star star half star
Date: 01/09/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Broken Sunday

I liked the dialect and the descriptions. I'm not sure about the end though. It's probably just hard to get that across. It sounds a bit as if she defends date rape but then I probably just misunderstood. She always blamed herself and so she blames Lizzie, too. The characters and settings are very good though.

retired featured story Charlotte Jones attempts to break past her barn-crashing facade and is adamant in finding a boyfriend who will at least have the courtesy to stay alive.

Rated: S
Categories: Short Stories
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2598 - Hits: 1684
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/08/2005 - Last Updated: 01/08/2005
Reviewer: snapeaddict Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/09/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Sour Milk

Great!! I loved this story. Your ideas are witty and original and I love the descriptions. Bravo! You so put a smile on my face!!

Metatron must play serpent in an unlikely Garden of Eden. A response to the "Dark and Stormy Night" challenge on ARFF, hence the corny opening line. Apocalyptic cheesy smut anyone?

Rated: L
Categories: General Chaos
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2140 - Hits: 234
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/13/2005 - Last Updated: 04/14/2005
Reviewer: snapeaddict Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/14/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Curiosity and Temptation

Very nice story and great descriptions...I love Alan as Metatron, one of his best roles.

Author's Response: I was just fascinated by what angels must secretly think about all that stuff they can't have. glad you liked it. thanks for reviewing

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Date: 05/05/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Curiosity and Temptation

wooo-hooo! Nice one, congrats for making the featured fics! :-)

Author's Response: i was i bit chuffed!