It's sad when anyone has to stoop to that... Excellent write, though. You didn't just make it mindless smut; you had a hard edge with a bit of a moral.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. I really appreciate the feedback.
Woah. I did NOT see that coming. That said, that made it an excellently done story. I applaude!!
Very nicely done! Oh, I want to hear more about this town.. awesomeness. You put this together very well.
Author's Response: Thanks again for the kind words. There's more to come about this town. Will hopefully post more soon. Thanks again.
That's beautiful.. you brought a perfect blend of my two favourite things together; music and stories. I could lmost hear the msuic as I listened to this.. Stunning! I love it!
That''s beautiful... I really love this story, how you wrote it, the story behind it all.. it's so touching. Thumbs up and may your gradmum rest in peace forevermore.
Author's Response: Hey! you're the first! Thanks for the kiind words. The story was just a different way of looking at something sad. My daughter did have a seizure and everything but I don't know about the rest. Just a different way of looking at it.