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Reviewer: Ms_Figg Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/14/2010 01:18 pm Title: The Snark And The Spark

This is a very interesting beginning although I have to be the only person on the planet not into Twilight.  And you know I LOVE vampires.   But I really like the premise.  Very creative.  The interaction between Snape and Cullens(?) was cautious and thoughtful.   I loved that Snape couldn't help working on the potion anyway. lol.  Had to make the print super big, but enjoyed it.  Will read a bit more. ***

Author's Response: No, I know a lot of persons who are not into Twilight. And I like your version of vampires too :) I had wondered if Severus's gift for Occlumency could block Edward's, and I had to write it. Well, any retired person needs a hobby, don't they?

Reviewer: Overhill Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/26/2009 09:12 pm Title: The Snark And The Spark

After all, he did not have an obligation to shout out on the rooftops what he was about to do. And wasn’t he allowed a harmless pastime like any other retired person?

I like this. Nicely crafted.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Chapter 2 is with my beta.

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