This is a very interesting beginning although I have to be the only person on the planet not into Twilight. And you know I LOVE vampires. But I really like the premise. Very creative. The interaction between Snape and Cullens(?) was cautious and thoughtful. I loved that Snape couldn't help working on the potion anyway. lol. Had to make the print super big, but enjoyed it. Will read a bit more. ***
Author's Response: No, I know a lot of persons who are not into Twilight. And I like your version of vampires too :) I had wondered if Severus's gift for Occlumency could block Edward's, and I had to write it. Well, any retired person needs a hobby, don't they?
After all, he did not have an obligation to shout out on the rooftops what he was about to do. And wasn’t he allowed a harmless pastime like any other retired person?
I like this. Nicely crafted.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Chapter 2 is with my beta.