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Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/07/2009 12:45 am Title: Spring Is In The Air

Oooppps!! It seems that Obi and Angel are alway getting caught in the act...I'm sure a little massaging of Obi's neck muscles is'nt inappropriate is it? It's not like they're doing the hanky panky like they were doing when her dad came home.
Reading the parts where they're kissing and all, makes one think things too...Sorry about that!
Oh! I loved the reference to Mr. Rickman that the bartender made at the pub. Mike, which I believe is Alan's brother's name. His other brother is David and his sister is Shiela, if I'm correct. I think AR's dad's name was Bejamin, and I forgot his mom's name.
Anyway, I thought that was cute!
I know one thing, this story has even seeped into my dreams! I hsd one with Alan/Obadiah in it, but I can't remember how it went! lol
Anyway, I'm glad the arrangements are all coming together for the wedding. I'm sure it will be a fun time.
And I'm glad Angelique is going back to Acton with Obi for his retreat. Hopefully Gertrude does'nt cause mayhem for them...A truly fun tale, I'm running out of lovely compliments, about this story, but I just love it!
I think it should get an award! Over on Mugglenet, they give out awards for their fanfics. This one deserves something, for crying out loud!
If it were'nt for the copyright laws, this would make a great movie.
Except the Barchester Chronicals people would need to grant permission for use of the charecter of Obadiah Slope...But Alan is too old to play him now!! Oh well...JUst a thought...*grins*

Author's Response: Thank you for your wonderful review..I so look forward to reading what you have to say..Umm, Yes, it was back then considered very inappropriate..Even the Hanky Panky part if caught would have been a scandel..Obadiah is living on the edge! LOL!! Bless him!Hey No need to apologize to me, I wrote it! Let's just say things got a bit steamy here when I did...and siser, you'll have ALOT more steamy moments in store to read in future chapters! yes Alan's brothers are Mike and Dave and sister Shelia..Father was Bernard and Mother Margaret...Oh my, seeping into your dreams is it..LOL...I KNOW the feeling!!! Obadiah stays with me night and day...I am thinking, and dreaming about him..I love this character so much...as I told another girl, OBI and Angel are like my children..LOL!! Thank you so much for your compliment...an Award.. I'd love to try and win one..Awwww, you think my story could be another movie...Bless you...THANK YOU so much for saying that! Again, Thank you for suck kind words about my story, I just love Obadiah so much..hope you enjoy reading the rest...((HUGS))

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/06/2009 10:44 pm Title: Bells Will Be Ringing 34 b

I'm glad that Obi and Angel got out of their little predictament, and that they safe. Obadiah is to admired for his manners, keeping his emotional morals intact. He's like all young men...I'm glad her family trusted him.
May 10th...Is that a special day in your life, Becky? Or was it just close your eyes and point a finger a a date on the calender...And he won't ever forget their anniversary as it is also Angelique's birthday!
I really don't think that Obi would object to a large wedding. I think he would say that it would be a celebration of their love.
I'm sure a muff would not go well in Texas! I hope you're not in the hot part of the state that has the 100 degree temperatures. I felt so bad for those who were in that heatwave.
Up here where I live in NE Pa, we'll be having our first hot days of the summer, starting on Sunday. I love to swim, but because of the cool weather, I could go swimming at the YMCA pool. Sunday, I will! Yay!!
Thanks for a great tale and I look forward to more Obi and Angel fun!

Author's Response: Yes, Obadiah is a TRUE gentleman...making his Angel safe and not ruining her reputation. He is a minister after all! Hmmm, May 10th...Yes it is..It is MY BIRTHDAY!! Thank you for staying with me..I hope you are enjoying it..Lots more to come!! Our Temps have been in the 100s, 2 weeks ago, but our heat index was up in the 105 range! ack! Thanks for your continued support!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/05/2009 11:25 pm Title: Bells Will Be Ringing

Well, maybe someone should've consulted the weather reports, huh? I guess it was inevitable that Obadiah and Angelique would wind up in the cottage.
At least (so far) Obi is behaving himself. And how does one ride sidesaddle without falling off? I've seen women ride like this on western tv shows and wondered how they stay up there. Being the 'tomboy' that I was, I vowed to ride like the cowboys and jockeys and the horseriders in the horse shows that I watched as a child. In fact two things in your story brought back two childhood fashion memories. ONe was the muff that Angel wore...When I was a tot, I had this cute littrle fur jacket, with a hood and a cute little muff that hung from my neck..needless to say, I was in love with my muff! lol The 2nd thing was the bowler hats that the riders in the horseshows wear. I used to watch the Devon Horsehow from Devon Pa, on tv, when I was little. I begged my mom to get me a hat like they wore as they rode their horses. And so at Christmastime, I got my very own velvet bowler riding hat! I was so proud of it and wore it everywhere! I never wore it riding a horse, thought. I did ride a huge horse and was scaresd to death!! I stuck to riding ponies after that! And my favorite book was Black Beauty....I loved horses as a child and hoped to have one when I grew up. Alas, that was before I learned all the things you have to do for them...
Back to Obi and Angel! A nice surprize about Brayton Procter coming to visit...See what happens when you drink? At least he's being noble and marrying the poor girl.
I apologize for bringing up childhood recollections, and I do love the story and look forward to more adventures with our favorite couple!

Author's Response: LOL, but the day started out so nice, it was such a *sudden* storm...And Obi is the perfect gentleman..And bless him he will continue to be until the day they marry! Yes I too wanted a horse, but egads I saw one once, it was very tall and actually scary..so that desire to own one didn't last long! Thank you for telling me about your owning a bowler hat and a muff..I ALWAYS wanted one, but it would have been quite impracticle in TEXAS! LOL!!! Yes Brayton did the right thing...Thank you for your continuing support..

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2009 10:43 pm Title: A Party and A Proposal 33b

At last! I'm happy that Obadiah proposed to Angelique...I thought maybe he would have done it in a more romantic place, but at least they had the fire in the fire place.
And he was surprized by the party, too.
Looking forward o see what happens with their engagement, and other adventures.
Thanks for the great story, and I look forward to reading more, much more!

Author's Response: Yes they did have a nice fire in the fireplace...As I thought about him proposing, and all the past issues he's had, I just felt like he would ask her at the party, where he felt secure and well not pressured...Stay tuned for more, lots of good things are going to happen..thank you for your continued support!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2009 01:01 am Title: A Party and A Proposal

It's not every day your young man turns thirty,eh? Paraphrasing a line from Harry Potter and the Sorcer's Stone. Said by Hagrid in the shack by the sea.
Okay, First of all, Obi should propose to Angelique in a more romantic setting...Just my two cents, lol.
A nice goft that Stephen gave him. He could wear that on his wedding day!
And it's nice that the Untners have a new housekeeper.
A question, how do you come up with the names for your charecters, outside of Obadiah and those that were in the Barchester Chronicals? I'm often curious as to how an author comes up with names. Sometimes when I write my stories, I use names of real people, due to the fact that I can relate to them easier than a fictional charecter.
I did write one story based on people that I knew personally, I changed the names. My first work of fiction, it was like a Stephen King type story, about a teenage boy who could'nt get what he wanted...He had tamtrums and acted out in bad ways. Sadly he came to a bad end, and I had to throw the story out, because I had no room to bring it up here to NE Pa.
I did write a story about a young teenaged Alan Rickman attending Hogwarts! Harry Potter and his pals were in it and I have this female charecter named Mary Kennedy, who also goes to Hogwarts and she and AR fall in love. Sadly it's incomplete, because of other things going on.
okay, Becky, I'll stop rambling, lol. Great story and I'm loving every minute of it! ;0)

Author's Response: *Waves hello* Thanks for reviewing..Glad you are continuing to like the story! Awwww, Well I thought the proposal was perfect, he did it when HE felt comfortable, when it was right for him, I think had it been in another setting he wouldn't have done it! Anyway...Yes Jeanette is the new housekeeper..Esther needed one.. Now as to character names...Some of the first names are taken from my own family, some from BABY NAME websites, that gives the meanings of the first names..The last names usually come from the PHONEBOOK of all things..or personal acquaintances..And if you will notice a few times I have used actual AR character names...LOL! Again thank you for the review...would love to read yours sometime... Becky

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2009 12:29 am Title: The Many Faces Of Love 32b

Cool!! I'm glad Obiadiah told Angel about his past. And as I knew she would, she was very understanding about that and about his mom.
And lol at Kenneth and Esther!! What a trip!! Poor Obi must've known that newlyweds are inseperatable...'the liitle soldier is up and standing at attention'. *giggle* I guess he'll be standing at attention for awhile...
Anyway, I'm glad that the dark side of Obi is over with, and maybe he can ask Angelique to marry him for crying out loud!
Thanks again for a great story! I actually read 2 chapters tonight, lol!

Author's Response: Yes that part was very difficult for him, poor baby! But Angelique is a sweet and forgiving person and she loves Obadiah very much so naturally she would...Glad you are still enjoying the story!!! Thank you for the review....

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2009 10:52 pm Title: The Many Faces Of Love

What a lovely ceromony! I know it won't be long before Obadiah and Angelique tie the knot. And yes! What IS Obadiah waiting for??? The poor guy is crazy about her and she's crazy for him.
I'm sure Kenneth will preform their ceromony.
It seems Obi still has memories of that Gertrude lady....I was going to call her 'that Oleson chick', but I felt it would be inappropriate, lol. Old bag is more like it, huh? *giggle*
I am enjoying this story more, than I did when I first started reading it. Maybe it had to do with seeing Half Blood Prince and how great AR looked in it! Or maybe I just felt bad that I stopped reading and let you down, Becky, since I'm you're 'biggest fan'.
But I'm back and I love the story, I hope to see more excitement as I continue!

Author's Response: I had a really great time writing the ceremony out..It might be a while before Obi and Angel tie the knot, He still has alot of issues to get through. I hope you will like the upcoming chapters..They both are in for a rather trying time. Aww sweetie, you didn't let me down, I understand you had Real life things going on...I too have those and had at one point stopped posting OA....but like you I am back...Thank you for your kind words...You're the best..

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2009 12:31 am Title: Hearts On Our Sleeves 31b

Well, I am glad that Obadiah and his mom resolved their differences. I had forgotten that part of the story. It seemed funny not to have Angelique in this chapter...A very lovely chapter and I'm glad all parties made up.
Obviously Mrs Oleson wanted to stir up trouble again...
Thanks again for another fine chapter.
And thanks for the recipe for Bubble and Squeak! It sounds easy to make...I'm not much on beef, but maybe I can try it with pork....Pork and saurkraut is one of my favorite dishes, along with kielbasa and kraut and hot dogs and kraut! And to think, when I was a kid, I hated saurkraut! lol

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review, yes they have finally made up...Angel will be back, I just felt that Obi and his mother needed to get things settled. Yes Gertrude does want to cause trouble..Stay tuned for more from her!! you're quite welcome for the recipe, it is the one I will be using...Hope you continue to enjoy the chapters...((HUGS)) Becky

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2009 10:41 pm Title: Hearts On Our Sleeves

I'm glad that Ruth got to see Obadiah and meet Angelique. The shower went well, as did the bacholor party. They would'nt dare holdboth events in the same home today!
Now, about 'Bubble and Squeak', what in the heck is that?? lol I was drinking some hot cappacino, (chocolate raspberry) and I burned my throat when I read that part..I had a giggle and wondered, what is that and how do you make that? I noticed you mentioned beef and cabbage...Is this something you make Becky or is it an Old English recipe?
And Angelique and Obadiah are still frisky. I'm waiting for them to 'go at it', but they keep getting interrupted.
Talk about being teased!! lol
Oh and They make moving sound so easy! Trust me, it's not as easy as Esther and Kenneth's move is. Of course they did'nt have as much to move in those days....I'll never move again!!
Anyway, great story as always, sorry for the long reviews. Thanks for making this such a wonderful tale.

Author's Response: Hi!! So glad you are enjoying the story..Alas, no I have not made Bubble and Squeak YET..I will include the recipe here so you can see what it is...I love to make and try new things, and all the ingredients seem easy.. Bubble and Squeak This classic dish originally contained beef along with the left-over cooked potatoes and cabbage, though today people don't generally bother with the meat. The name is apparently due to the sounds that are emitted during cooking, the vegetables bubble as they are boiled and then squeak in the frying pan. INGREDIENTS: Butter - 25 g (1 oz) Onion - 1, finely chopped Potatoes - 450 g (1 lb), cooked and mashed Cabbage - 225 g (8 oz), Beef - 4-8 slices, cooked and finely chopped (optional). COOKING: 1. Melt the butter in a large frying pan, add the onion and fry for a few minutes until softened, stirring frequently. 2. Add the potatoes and cabbage. If you are including the beef, add this as well. Fry over a medium heat for 15 minutes until brown then serve. Thank you for your review...And I know how hard moving is nowdays..I'm for sure not moving again..LOL!! I hope you continue to enjoy the story...lots of twists and turns ahead!!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2009 11:05 pm Title: Painful Separations

Ooooo!! Hotty Totty!!! Someone throw some ice water on these two! Just kidding!
Well, it seems Angelique has a thing for Obadiah's butt, *giggle* I had to laugh, every time she did it, because of Obi's reaction. And she daringly did it at Church!! I hope The Good Lord was looking the other way....
Even Mom and Dad are getting frisky.
I know Hammersmith is in England, but do they really have alot of snow in England? I know London is noterious for fogg and drizzle. But, I'm just curious, since you piled tons of snow in this tale...Maybe you're a snow lover, Becky? I love snow, and I ive in a perfect place for it!
Great story as always and I am looking forward to reading more.
Oh, and I wonder if these two lovebirds are going to engage in a little hanky panky...Being a pastor, anda man of high morals, I'm sure Obadiah won't let things get too out of hand...Of course, when you're in love as he is, everything else flies out the window.
Thanks again for a great tale!

Author's Response: LOL!! Yes she loves his derrier..bless her!! Daring isn't she!! LOL!! Yes they do have snow in England, and especially back then, altho with the global warming situation, it is getting less and less..As for the hanky panky..I'll never tell! LOL!!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: moonstargazer Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2009 11:50 pm Title: Painful Separations

Awww! What a cute ending!! Mistletoe will do it every time! lol Another great chapter, fun to read and it had me giggling too. Poor Obie can't keep his emotions in check too well, when Angelique is near. I'd suggest a cold shower, but they probably did'nt have showers back then. And the word 'trousseau' threw me for a loop, until I figured that it meant Esther's wardrobe.
And Obadiah spraining his ankle in the snow and ice, he'd better be careful, next time. Guess they did'nt have rock salt either, lol Or snowplows. Kind of hard to put a snow plow with a horse.
Again, great chspter, Becky, and I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you Florence...I'm so glad you are still enjoying the story..No they didn't have snow plows...LOL!! Yes Mistletoe will do it everytime...Hope you like the future chapters...thank you for your review!

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Date: 07/27/2009 11:48 pm Title: Decisions Are Made

Hello, Becky! It's me, Florence! I'm finally getting around to finish reading your wonderful story. I just read the chapter, where Obadiah helps Kenny move into his new home.
I also see that he and Esther are dating and they sound like they're getting married...Along with Obie and his Angel.
I was worried about Obie leaving Chance out in the snow while he went in to eat dinner. This was before he went over to see the doctor about his stitches.
Obadiah and Angelique are acting like a couple of teenagers, sneaking around, stealing kisses and whatnot.
It is nice to visit with old friends again. I have alot to catch up on! ;0)

Author's Response: Hello Florence...Aww, I'm so glad you have started reading Obi again...We missed you!! Yes they are definately in love...I hope you continue to enjoy the story, lots of twists and turns have and are taking place!! Welcome back!!

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Date: 07/26/2009 02:27 am Title: New Growth For Hammersmith B

I am so pleased that they are now expecting! Your talents are out of this world to me Becky! I so live through Obi & Angel!! Loyally, awaiting your next chapter...Always your friend...~WRR~

Author's Response: Awww, thank you so much, you have made my day!! Yes a baby, but don't expect smooth sailing! It's going to be a bumpy ride!! LOL! Will try to post again soon....

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Date: 07/26/2009 02:22 am Title: New Growth For Hammersmith

Oh, just wonderful Becky! I LOVE peaches!!..LOL! Thankyou for making my birthday one of the best in quite awhile! ((Hugs)) ~WRR~

Author's Response: OH MY!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!! LOL!! Have some PEACH ICECREAM!!! LOL!!! So glad you like this chapter! ((HUGS))

Reviewer: Angela Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2009 07:36 pm Title: New Growth For Hammersmith B

Lovely chapter, I knew she was with child the moment I read of her being sick. How wonderful for them! I'm so excited, I can't help it I'm a mom and if I wasn't I would still be thrilled. *giggles* I look forward the next chapter. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank's Angie...Stay tuned and hold on to your hat...

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Date: 07/24/2009 07:12 pm Title: New Growth For Hammersmith

Oh my Becky you certainly know how to have them eating a simple peach very sensual! *fans face* This chapter was worth the wait well done. :) Now I'm off to read the next part.

Author's Response: Yes, don't we love peaches..LOL!! I know I do!!

Reviewer: jarjarbettye Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/24/2009 10:55 am Title: New Growth For Hammersmith B

You don't know how long I've waited for an update.  I check at least twice a day.  Perfect way to start my vacation.  I love this story and these characters.  A baby is perfect!  Well done!

Author's Response: Awww thank you sweetie, glad I could make the start of your vacation a bit brighter.. Yes a baby! Look for a surprise in the next chapter...I feel so honored that you love my story so much..This story has been a labour of LOVE for me...It's my 'escape' if you will...I love Obi so much...He is my hero!!!! ((HUGS))

Reviewer: Angela Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/20/2009 09:55 pm Title: Conferences and Confrontations B

Sorry so late with a review but like I told you a few days ago...I loved it. I really loved it when Angelique told off that old bat in the last chapter. I felt so bad for Obadiah when he got sunburned poor man but at least his Angel knew what to do. :)

Author's Response: Thank's Angie, Yes Angel is quite resourceful, thats what happens when you grow up in a Doctors home! Yes poor Obi!!! glad you enjoyed the chapter!

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Date: 05/10/2009 06:12 am Title: Conferences and Confrontations B

Just making a quick stop to wish you a Happy Birthday Becky! ~WRR~

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I have had a great day so far!!! ((HUGS))

Reviewer: Witchyredrose Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2009 08:42 pm Title: Conferences and Confrontations B

Again Becky, ....WOW!! I am so hot under the collar now..lol, I imagine so is Obi, From his shoulders down his strong muscled back, all the way to his tight mounds of....AHEM...Um yes, GREAT JOB Becky,Please keep up the great work! Many Blessings...~WRR~

Author's Response: Thanks Again, WWR..LOL Got a bit warm when I was writing it too! Had to turn on the A/C..LOL...Thank you for your kind review, I'm going to begin on Chapter 52 soon, I try to give it at least a week between chapters..Blessings and Hugs to you...Becky

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Date: 05/02/2009 08:42 pm Title: Conferences and Confrontations

WOW.....Great, I am so happy that they finally made it to his sanctuary! Good Gods, I LOVE how this couple are portrayed! Moving on to the next chapter ASAP!!...LOL ~WRR~

Author's Response: Thank You WWR..Yes he just had to show Angel his sanctuary..I'm glad you are still enjoying the story..Thank you for your kind words..((HUGS))

Reviewer: jarjarbettye Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2009 06:44 pm Title: Conferences and Confrontations B

I really love this couple.  It's nice to read about 2 people who are so obviously in love and happy.


Author's Response: Oh I'm so glad you do, I have really enjoyed writing this pair..The characters just seemed to take on a life of their own..Finished chapter 51, and will be starting 52 soon, Lots in store for them, in upcoming chapters...I hope you will like them..

Reviewer: jarjarbettye Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2009 06:43 pm Title: Conferences and Confrontations

It was so great to see Gertrude get hers.  Well done Becky.



Author's Response: Yes I was glad Angel told her off...she deserved it!! Thank you for the complement! ((HUGS))

Reviewer: makaem Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/02/2009 08:09 am Title: Conferences and Confrontations B

So is the old bag through causing problems for them? Oh, and I watched the BBC production of Barchester Chronicles. I like your Slope so much better.

Author's Response: No Gertrude leaves them alone, she doesn't venture out of Acton...altho....*plot bunny hopping around*....Yes MY Obadiah is such a sweetheart...sigh

Reviewer: Angela Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/07/2009 10:24 pm Title: The Wedding 38B

Excellent Becky, The wedding was beautiful and the honeymoon was VERY HOT! Where can I find a man like Obadiah? ;)

Author's Response: Thanks Angie, Glad you liked it...Oh and I've been asking myself the same question!

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