Well, if you were 16 when you wrote it, I'm impressed. Short, angsty and really fluid. It was a good short.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! This was the first short story I've ever written, and yes, I did indeed write it when I was 16...that was 5 years ago! Hard to believe. Fluidity is something I sometimes struggle with, so I'm glad this worked! Thanks again!