[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:32 pm Title: 13 - Goodbye and Hello (Becky, Apythia)
I had forgotten how good this story was! I had a blast writing it with you guys and look forward to doing it again soon! ~ Apythia
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:29 pm Title: 13 - Goodbye and Hello (Becky, Apythia)
Ohh Becky, great argument.
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:28 pm Title: 12 - The Lights Go Out (Court, Jesse)
Jesse - great struggle scene. And yet another mystery man.
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:26 pm Title: 12 - The Lights Go Out (Court, Jesse)
Court - wow - twists and turns. Fred sold them out! And a gun....
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:24 pm Title: 11 - Temper (Becky, Cyndi)
Ohhh.... cliffhanger! PL is acting rather childish. Serves him right to fall on his bum!
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:23 pm Title: 11 - Temper (Becky, Cyndi)
Becky - Glad to see everyone is accounted for. That is going to be one interesting dinner with all of them!
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:19 pm Title: 10 - Fred Returns (Court, Jesse)
Jesse - "He hung his head, knowing that if he could control his lust, they wouldn't now be in this situation." But then we'd have no story! Wow, PL's being kind of a jerk here, isn't he?
Author's Response: Well, he always thought with the wrong head...hee hee!
[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:16 pm Title: 10 - Fred Returns (Court, Jesse)
Court - I like how you set the scene with them and PL peeping through the keyhole.
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:13 pm Title: 9 - Forgotten Company (Becky, Cyndi)
Cyndi - Oh the danger PL finds himself in. He might have been better off with Frank! Sarah should have went after PL!
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:11 pm Title: 9 - Forgotten Company (Becky, Cyndi)
Becky - oh what a way to end it. Hell hath no fury, indeed!
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:09 pm Title: 8 - Things That Go Bump in the Night (Jesse)
Very hot Jesse! Lots of lemony goodness here!
Author's Response: Thanks, Apythia!
[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:07 pm Title: 7 - Enter the Wronged Man (Candace)
"Well, maybe if you weren't off all the time, screwing everything in a skirt that moves, we wouldn't be in this mess!" - Well said Sarah!
Oh nice plot twist!
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:04 pm Title: 6 - Searching For Sanctuary (Cyndi, Court)
Nice Job, Court! I especially liked this line:
To him they were just three people set adrift in dangerous seas and the storm was still brewing
And yet another mystery player arrives....
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:03 pm Title: 6 - Searching For Sanctuary (Cyndi, Court)
Cyndi -- oh catfight! Who to trust.... One bed... wonder where that may lead...
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 02:01 pm Title: 5 - Home At Last (Becky, Apythia)
Becky - way to leave us hanging... who could it be?
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 01:59 pm Title: 4 - Where to Hide? (Jesse)
Even battered, he still has a way with the women. He should learn when to shut his mouth though.
And the plot thickens!
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 01:56 pm Title: 3 - P.L. is Welcomed By Frank (Cyndi)
Oohh the intrigue increases! PL just can't stay out of trouble, can he?
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 01:54 pm Title: 2-He's Just So Confident-Becky, Apythia
Becky - He gets right to the point, doesn't he. Names are so not important :)
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 01:52 pm Title: 1-First Impressions (Cyndi, Jesse)
Jesse - PL is ever the charmer, isn't he? I loved his reaction to her offer to buy him a drink.
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[Report This]Date: 05/03/2006 01:51 pm Title: 1-First Impressions (Cyndi, Jesse)
Cindi - Excellent start! You had a great discription of him packing up for the night. I could picture him in his dressing room getting ready to leave.
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[Report This]Date: 05/02/2006 01:01 pm Title: 13 - Goodbye and Hello (Becky, Apythia)
I wanted to read the whole thing before I reviewed. This was excellent, I loved every every chapter especially the hot one. *winks*
Angie
Author's Response: Thanks Angie for your review..I'm glad you are enjoying the
story. I like the "HOT" chapter too *grin* Hugs, Becky
Author's Response: Thanks Angie. It was fun to write with everyone. Glad you
enjoyed it! - Apythia
Author's Response: Thanks Angie. It was fun to write with everyone. Glad you
enjoyed it! - Apythia
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2006 05:12 pm Title: 13 - Goodbye and Hello (Becky, Apythia)
Excellent Apythia... Loved it!!
Author's Response: Again, I thank you for the excellent set up. I thing we all make
a great team. - Apythia
[Report This]Date: 04/25/2006 05:00 pm Title: 3 - P.L. is Welcomed By Frank (Cyndi)
LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!! Poor PL
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[Report This]Date: 04/21/2006 11:58 am Title: 12 - The Lights Go Out (Court, Jesse)
Excellent Court and Jesse. This has been a real treat! Love, Cyndi
Author's Response: Thank you! --jesse
[Report This]Date: 04/20/2006 09:00 pm Title: 11 - Temper (Becky, Cyndi)
Great chapter Cyndi!!! Poor PL
Author's Response: awwww...thank you! (-Cyndi)