Reviews For One Last Thing
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Reviewer: Amanda7 Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 05/04/2007 07:00 pm Title: Three

Hot and intelligent, a rare combination. I like that the story is about the fact that some women think good looking men are out of their reach, while those men value intelligence over model looks. Good job.

Reviewer: nightshift Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/29/2005 03:50 pm Title: Only One

Well written dialogue, and excellent characterization. And being one of those brilliant, intimidating women myself, I just love the ending.

Author's Response: Good God lady, I know what you mean. I don't have to tell you this didn't fall far from the personal fantasy tree...Only thing is, when I went to write it, she got more complicated, and he got nicer. Hmmm...maybe a visit with the shrink there....anyhoo, thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Samantha_kathy Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/26/2005 03:29 pm Title: Only One

Oh, I absolutely love it. Brilliant characterisation for such a short piece. You keep the tension on a good level, and feeling sympathy with the woman is no problem at all. You probably could have 'angsted' it out a little more, but the fact that you didn't doesn't deminishes my delight in reading this story at all.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am a humble writer, and a science major. I have several friends who are literary people; teachers, students, PhD's...and they all tell my this is good but I could do better. Look for a reqrite in the future. I may add a bit more angst...

Reviewer: faeriequeen Signed star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 10/17/2005 07:53 am Title: Only One

That is such a sweet story! The last line is great, and makes a nice clincher to the repeated 'guys like you...' bit. Loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad that you liked it. And I can't tell you how much I appreciate you taking the time to review!

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