Very interesting premise! I've never reviewed anything on the Chaos site before. This was quite an enjoyable story. Thank you for your writing.Author's Response: Thank You for your review!
OMGosh, I love this, I'm so happy he went back and helped Eliza!! Squeeeeeeee!! Happy at last!
Wow, you didn't hold back! A rarity in time travel stories. Too bad about the time machine and Master J. One can only imagine what happened to them...
Absolutely Fantastic!!!! I just love this story!
CyndiAuthor's Response: Coming from a published author - that is praise indeed - Thank You!
Oh, this story is begging for more! Glad to see it posted here! It would make a wonderful addition to the birthday book! Hint, hint...Author's Response: Thank you so much jesse. I will think about it!
I love this story, West Dean. Congratulations on posting it here!Author's Response: Thank you Jay. I was a bit concerned that by writing this I have stranded your character in the past or got him stuck in a time loop!