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Reviewer: EXECUTR Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2005 10:07 pm Title: Harder Than Expected

Very sweet. Nice read.

Reviewer: aerynfire Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/11/2005 10:08 am Title: Harder Than Expected

This was a wonderful story. I like that finally someone is writing about Padme too...but hey that's me. Actually, what got me here was the imagry and the sheer emotional whallop. There is also a tragic element to it (especially at the end) as we all know what is going to happen to this pair of star-crossed lovers. Also this bit when he comes back to her, reminded me of a scene in Clone Wars, when he returns home after being made a full fledged knight, as they just hold each other and disappear back into their rooms. Though I agree also with her that (and you showed this) in many ways Anakin had grown up and hardened...I do have to say in many ways he did not. But that is neither here nor there when dealing with your story. Again, Kudos to you on such a well-written piece. ~Aeryn (of aerynfire)

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