Reviews For Severing the Past
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Reviewer: PinkCorsair Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/16/2005 08:10 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Seventeen? Happy Birthday!!!! It looks like Kerenne and her brother mmight try and look up their Jedi relitives.

Reviewer: spikedust Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2005 10:04 pm Title: Chapter Eight

thanks for another good chapter, wendynat. you're able to describe the monotony of long-distance space travel, while still maintaining some tension about the main storyline. the sense of confusion and frustration that N'oenar feels comes across nicely. using Force dreams to keep N'oenar up-to-date on events could be cliched, but his thoughts and feelings about what he's seeing prevents this from happening. keep up the good work!

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