Such longing is conveyed through this poem, and it's almost like I get a sense of the object of the affections...sounds like a wonderful person, even if they might seem unapprochable.
And if you knew of this curse I feel, Would you cut me down or help me heal? Amazing poem it really touched me!
Reading your poem just reminded me of how beautiful the English language can sound. I'll have to wait until I'm alone to read it again aloud :) Thank you for this!
Stunning.
Author's Response: The question is, stunningly good, or stunningly bad? ;-) LOL Thanks.
Oh wow Rachel, I didn't know you wrote poetry as well.
I love the image of savage pain, the Don Quoxie chasing the windmill of words that can only be appeased by someone who is probably not even aware of his/her impact.
Author's Response: I don't...this just kind of came out one day. Maybe I'll write some poetry again sometime. :-) Don Quixote...hmmm, I've got that on my shelf finally, I do believe I should go read it. Thanks for the review!
Excellent work! This is amazing poem. I enjoy the wistfullness and sorrow it seems to convey.
GG
Author's Response: Thanks :-)