Reviewer: snapeaddict Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/07/2005 06:02 am Title: Waiting Between the Doors

Very good. I like the descriptions, you really make it easy to imagine the clinic atmosphere. I liked the inner monologue, too and the contrast between what "Powder Blue" says and actually feels... I think no woman (or hardly any) would take this decision light-heartedly. Just detected a minor typo: envied them and they way they (the way they...)

Author's Response: Thank you! This is my very first original fiction. And I'll fix that typo straight away.