This caught my interest because of the town being called Hollow Hills... the name of a song I quite like. An interesting ghost story. If you haven't considered it, I suggest you expand upon this and create a longer, more detailed work about this ghost, and perhaps even Maria. It'd be quite interesting, I think.
Very nicely done! Oh, I want to hear more about this town.. awesomeness. You put this together very well.
Author's Response: Thanks again for the kind words. There's more to come about this town. Will hopefully post more soon. Thanks again.